Wow! I really, really adore the claws on this one! I friggin love his design too! Such amazing patterns and designs! i love the glowy look you gave them too! <3 I'm a fan of Black and Gold characters! You have some fanart coming your way Dude! 8D I'd love to hear his story! Its always so interesting to hear character's life stories! <3

Alrighty, here's your crits:
Alrighty, as much as I love Rejection you could have made his body alittle fatter. It looks a tad too thin so just make him more chunky next time, Mmmkay?

Also, your front arms look a bit too straight, the shoulder and elbow are perfectly fine but its where its got a gold line around the wrist part, it needs a little bend! So keep that in mind next time you draw him!
Everything else looks just nifty! <3 Keep it up! 8D

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Looove the shiny highlights across his skin, claws and hair. Usually one of the first things I notice in your art. Although there are highlights in the fur, I think you could try and make the hair less flat? Add some more shading or texture into the hair, mebbe?
I love love looove the markings, you are always so creative in your designs. The colour scheme is faaabulous, seems very dark egyptian.
I loove the shape of his horns, claws, and nose/muzzle/snout, and the pose is so cute. x) Yet I think the shape of the tail could use a little edit, follow the line of the other side of the tail, so it flows smoothly and doesnt have odd bumps in it. Its sort of thinner, gets bigger, thinner again, gets bigger, then thins out at the end. Drawing a line as a guide can help, then just copy it out alongside it. Hope that makes sense? His jaw, just underneath the cross, bulges out low a bit too much, and he could be a bit too skinny. You could use a reference of a similar animal to get the muscles and thickness right. Unless of course this is how you intended the design to be.
I just adore the paws/claws... Methinks you are improving. >;D And the gold & hair across his face is just too cool.
I wiiish I had your imaginaaation. Its just a bloody cool desiiiign.
Oooh, ohh, hope I wasnt too harsh in the above critique. I tend to go a bit overboard when trying to 'help'. I really do love this though!

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Thank you Jade 8D I have to say I'm really keen on his design too, I've always loved trying different colour combinations. This one has worked well, and for that I'm so glad xD
Fanart?! o: YAY! Thank you Jade, that's made my day!
I'll be sure to add his story when I can be bothered xD

Thanks for the crits too Jade, I completely see what you mean! I'll also try to fix the pic c: And thanks for the fave!

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate every single one of your comments -- they go into such depth! ~
You mean, add some darker highlights? I'll try that out next time, thank you! :3
I guess it's the black, gold and brown which makes him seem dark Egyptian. I thought that also when I was designing him

Ah, at a second look I see what you mean about the tail! I'll fix that
I have to say I'm also proud of the claws :3 I've came a long way since my old account xD

THANK YOU SO MUCH! It wasn't too harsh at all, I need your crits to improve!!

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Im glad I can help
Yes, darker highlights could help. I just mean adding more in general, so it isn't just flat, filled colour.




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Ahh, I get what you mean! I'll try that out on my next piece

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Woww Jade!
You made me look realy bad!! XP
I realy love the way you have drawn our fellow rejection!<3 umm right, critique, well all i could say is yes some darker highlights they would help a bit.. and Maybe make the hair abit less flat coulour, i can see you have added highlights already, maybe just a few more scribbles here and there? i mean well im no one to critique someone of your talent but i try to help a lil xxx
You have done fabulously, i have fallen for rejection! <3
gorgeous Jade he realy is <3

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Aww come on Jess, your art is 500 times better than this xP
Thank you though
And cheers for the crits, I'll keep them in mind


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jade your words Does Be Lies
I LOVES YOU , And Rejection<3

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